I really liked the twitterives we went over in class. They gave me ideas for mine and I really liked to see how others did things.
Alissa francisco- I really enjoyed seeing how her soft ball carrier ended and the emotional factors that went along with the quitting of her dream. I thought she should add dialoged when talking to the instructions and possibly dreams from when she was little about wanting to be a softball player in college. All together I liked how it flowed.
David Reyes- I really enjoyed the idea of this twitterive it needs a little more organization but I think it will be great.
Christie Johnson- I really enjoyed this twitterive I related alot to it. I think if you added dialogue with the speech her grandfather made even if it is shortened and made up it will add an emotional aspect that is not there completely.
Rebecca Crawford- I love the past present and future. If you just define them in the house the wedding and your 21st birthday it will be perfect. You have a lot of good things in there I love the timer idea.
Alissa francisco- I really enjoyed seeing how her soft ball carrier ended and the emotional factors that went along with the quitting of her dream. I thought she should add dialoged when talking to the instructions and possibly dreams from when she was little about wanting to be a softball player in college. All together I liked how it flowed.
David Reyes- I really enjoyed the idea of this twitterive it needs a little more organization but I think it will be great.
Christie Johnson- I really enjoyed this twitterive I related alot to it. I think if you added dialogue with the speech her grandfather made even if it is shortened and made up it will add an emotional aspect that is not there completely.
Rebecca Crawford- I love the past present and future. If you just define them in the house the wedding and your 21st birthday it will be perfect. You have a lot of good things in there I love the timer idea.
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